Thank you darkest.
but i did think it was a little.. rugged. so i changed lines 2 and 5. the new results were...
My tears come down with the rain so nobody notices.
Like crows searching for food, my cries cut through the air,
But no faster than the pain cuts through my open wounds.
I'll just lay here and look up at the strange new world
I'm about to drown in. Where'd she go? Will I ever know?
How can I call myself sane when someone's got my mind?.
Nobody EVER eat at McDonalds. The place supports hell's kitchen. (not the show, i'm talking about the place. its behind the counters of McD's.
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